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Mezmerland by AAGGRESSS

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It was a day like any other around the Mato house...with the exception of a distinct lack of explosians.
Jake had just woken up at the crack of noon, obviously enjoying the newfound freedom his break from school granted him, but all at once, her realised something was amiss. Noone had barged in and desturbed him, and the PProfessors experiments had not wrecked havoc, for anyone else, this would be a great relief, but it just filled Jake with dread.

Jake: O great. What are they up to now?

Without a second thought, Jake slipped huridly into his day cloths and dashed downstairs, there, he saw the entire female population of the house, sitting (or floating in Dawns case) infront of the T.V. as it spouted a strange add.

T.V.: ...Come on down to Mezmerland, where your fantasys come true!

Like a chorus of zombies, the girls said in unisen "Mezmerland, where your fantasys come true..." Then, all at once, they got up and walked out the door, moving like zombies. Jake took a long look at the T.V. The add had a strange glow to it, and he found it hard to look away, but just before his mind went blank, the T.V., and every light in the house, exploded in a jolt of electricity. From the basement, Jake could hear the all too familiar cry "I am a genious!"

Jake hurried downstairs, about to tell Professor Mato what had happend to the girls, when he saw the cause of the power outage. One of the professors experiments, vaguely resembling a Tesla-coil sat at the center of the room, emitting a soft glow.

The Professor noticed Jake come in, and shouted with joy,

Mato: Jake, my boy! I am a genious! I have finally invented the perfect way to attract new research subjects. The Chick Magnet! It reads only female D.N.A. and brings them here!

Jake was less than amused.

Jake: That thing just blew every fuze in the house just to power up!

Mato A slight power deficiancy, it takes the houses entire power source to project a radius of ten feet...But once I tap into the citys power grid...

Jake: Don't even think about it. And besides, we have a more imediate problem. The girls all went to some new amusement park and...

Mato: A new amusement park? That would be perfect. I could use a break to recharge my genious before we get the Chick Magnet to its second test Phaze.

Jake: Professor, you're not listening! The girls were hypnotized to go there. I think something is wrong here!

Mato looked back at his latest invention.

Mato: Well, if I get the chick magnet up and running, we can bring them back.

jake face palmed and shook his head.

Jake: It looks like it's up to me...Again.


Jake quickly rushed over to dianas house, hoping to get help from her and Mina, or atleast make sure they were safe, only to find Dianas mother sitting entranced infront of the T.V. as the exact same add played, with the girls nowhere in sight. He next rushed to the police station, but found a similar scene there, and he soon began to notice that the streets were devoid of civilians. Only people with important jobs, necessary to the citys wellbeing remained, everyone else was either in a trance, or just plain missing.

Jake: What's going on here!!?

As Jake stood in the middle of the empty road, screaming in frustration, he was suddenly bumped by a young squirel girl, with her eyes glazed ofer as she walked slugishly foreward.

Squirel girl: Mezmerland...where all your fantasys come true...Mezmerland...

Having few other ideas, Jake decided to follow the squirel girl to find out exactly what Mezmerland was. After several minutes of following her slugish pace, he became exasperated, and decided to simply look up the location on a public computer terminal. With the directions scrawled on his hand in pen, Jake dashed to his destination, arriving at the gates of the brightly lt attraction completely out of breath. Upon looking up at the massive expanse of carnival music and flashign lights, Jape ponderd how he could have possibly missed this location before. But suddenly, he heard an all to familir voice, and turned to see a sight that no amount of crazyness could have ever prepared him for...

Jessica in a stripperific clown soctume, complete witth a colorful, swirly hat, and a star painted around one eye. Her body was covered by a short but colorful vest, open at the top, and exposing both her midriff , and a grerat deal of clevage, and a short, red and white striped skirt, with tight, multycolored stalkings covering her legs, ending with jester shoes on her feet.

Jessica: Welcome to Mezmerland, where all your fantasys come true.

Upon seeing this, jake got a nosebleed at stairing at ehr exposed clevage.



To be continued...Right now.


Mezmerland Part 2



When we last left Jake, he had just arrived at the mysterious theme park, Mezmerland, where most of the city had been hypnotized to attend, by its T.V. Broad cast. Including all of Jakes housemates, with the exception of Professor Mato.

Jake stood before Jessica, who was waring a very revealing jester costume.

Jessica: Welcome to Mezmerland, where all your fantasies come true.

Jake: Jessica?

Jake attempted to stir a response from her by waving his hand in front of her face, but she just stood there, repeating the same line over and over. Eventually, he gave up and walked through the gate...only for it to slam shut behind him. When he turned to see, Jessica had disappeared. Having no other choice, he continued onward, into the park. The first attraction that caught his attention, was Dawn. He nearly fell over laughing at the sight, as the demon girl, with a sweet, vacant smile on her face, was vending balloons to a crowd of kids. Jake could only imagine what Dawn would say if she ever found out what she had done while under the parks spell. Bu waking her proved just as ineffective as with Jessica, and he gained the ire of many small children for holding up the line. Going deeper into the park, he began to see what had become of his other friends. Diana was walking a tight rope, waring nothing but a small, one piece leotard. Sarah had been turned into a living puppet by use of giant strings that integrated into her cybernetics, and was being used in a life sized puppet show. Fawn was dressed like a mermaid, and singing for a crowd from inside a giant clam. Katia had been turned into a magicians lovely assistant, the scary part was that Mina had been turned into the magician. Jen was dancing on a stage (big surprise). Yuta had been tied to a spinning board that a knife thrower was aiming at, and Lucia was standing atop a giant Christmas tree.

Jake: What is wrong with this place? and why was everyone hypnotized to come Here? I have to talk to whoever is in charge.

But before he could ask for directions, he heard a cry for help. He spun around to see another girl in a similar jester costume being assaulted by a man in a black shirt. Without stopping to think up a plan...or to think at all for that matter, Jake picked up the nearest trash can and hurled it at the man, surprised to see it knock him out. He walked up the the girl, and helped her up. She was dressed similarly to Jessica, but had a 3 tailed jesters cap, and a different color scheme. she also had black hair that reached down to the small of her back. As Jake continued to question how he had knocked her attacker out so easily, the girl threw her arms around him and cried into his chest.

Girl: (in a French accent) Thank you! Thank you! I was so scared!

Jake was surprised that someone in the park still had free will, but he couldn't think of what to say. He decided to simply ask "What's your name?"

Girl: Cherry.

(intermission)


Mezmerland part 3


(When we last left Jake, the entire city had been hypnotized to come to the strange Theme park, Mezmerland. After journeying there and seeing all of his friends made into the attractions, Jake managed to save a jester girl from an attacker, and learned that her name was Cherry.)


Jake: Do you know who is in charge here?


Cherry: Oui, but you do not want to go there.


Jake: I have to if I want to rescue my friends, and the entire city.


Cherry: Si vous insistez. I will take you to him.


(With that, Cherry let Jake through the park. Along the way, he saw many other strange oddities, made from the people of the city. Many of them looked dangerous, like the people would not have the courage to preform them if it were not for the hypnosis. Finally, they reached the center of the park, appropriately, it was a big-top tent. Jake was led inside, where he saw a large, microphone-like device, covered in a glass case, and just to the side of it, a pale, thin man waring street cloths and sitting in the ringmasters chair.)


Thin man: Welcome, young boy. I have been expecting you.


Jake: you have?


Thin man: Even if you try to hide it, news of your power of hypnosis travels fast. Once i did a little research and managed to find the source of all this cities weirdness, you were easy to track down.


Jake: Who are you, and why have you done all this!?


Thin man: I am Cameron Rosetti. A king among Vampirers...or Perhaps to a westerner like you, a count would be more appropriate.


(Jake stumbled back and fell on his rear.)

Jake: V-Vampires?


Cameron: Yes, and I came here for you.


Jake: Y-you're going to suck my blood?


Cameron: Don't be an idiot, boy. Vampires don't actually suck blood...


Jake: *Phew*


Cameron: We drain your life force directly, like sucking out your soul.


(Jake nearly fainted after hearing this, but Cameron was not done yet.)


Cameron: As you can see, using the power of the Magnifire, i have enslaved this entire city.


(Cameron points at the large microphone.)


Cameron: But even with this, my power is limited. I am here to give you an option. Cliche as it might be. If you join me, our combined power will be enough to enslave the entire planet. You would have all the fame and women you want. So what do you say, boy?


(Jake made his way to his feet, looked Cameron strait in the eye, and said "No!")


Jake: I don't care what I get in return. I would never help anyone take over the world. Especially after you kidnapped my friends!


Cameron:...O, such a shame. Well than...Cherry, please take out the garbage.


(Jake suddenly heard the familiar voice coming from behind him)


Cherry: Oui Oui, Papa.


Jake: Papa?


(Before Jake could even turn around, Cherry punched him with such force that he flew right into the Magnifires casing. Picking himself up, he could see that whatever Cameron had said activated a subliminal command in cherry. she had a mad look in her eyes, and a maniacal grin that showed off her teeth. Sharp like a sharks.)


Jake: What did you do to her?!


Cameron: Actually, I think I saved lives when I had her brainwashed. Cherry has been a psycho since she was a child. I finally had the commands put in as a measure of personal safety.


Jake: You staged her getting attacked to bring me here, didn't you?


Cameron: I had to be sure, and if nothing else, Teach cherry some humility.


Jake: you are a complete monster!


Cameron: I'm also completely in control.


(Cameron snaps his fingers, and Cherry advances on Jake. As she moves, her hair seems to grow longer, and move like it has a mind of its own, till finally, with a swing of her entire body, her hair elongates out and ties Jake up. Slowly constricting him.)


(Jake feels the hair begin to chock the life out of him, and realises there is one way to stop it. With his last bit of air, he calls "Cherry!". This is enough to get her attention, and she turns her head to look at him, seeing into his eyes, which are now glowing gold.)


(Cherry begins to lose herself in the golden glow. Her erratic mind calms down for the first time in centuries, and her fathers commands seem a thousand miles away. As she drifts into a trance, she is at peace for the first time in her life.)


(Jake on the other hand, begins to feel stronger. As Cherrys hair loosens, he can breath again, but he keeps focused on cherry. He notices that his power seems to be considerably stronger than usual, and notices that the casing on the Magnifire has cracked, causing it to empower Jakes abilities much farther than they could normally go.)


(Cherry absolutely adores the feeling of being at peace. Like she's floating on a river of silk. In the back of her entranced mind, she begins to see that Jake is the one giving her this feeling. She begins wanting to bond with him.)


Cameron: what are you waiting for? Finish him!


(Upon her fathers command, Cherrys inner piece begins to crumble, as she obeys her father, her hair slowly begins to constrict again.)


(Jake feels the hair tighten, his concentration is momentarily broken, causing Cherrys violent side to re emerge, and put the squeeze on him. Jake knows he is seconds away from blacking out, but with one final burst of energy, his eyes radiate a brilliant, gold beam that strikes Cherrys eyes. Her hair drops around him, and shrinks back to normal length, and a second later, she falls to her knees, wide eyed and with a look of both fear and confusion on her face.)


Cameron: Damn it, Cherry! Kill him!


Cherry: No.


Cameron: What did you just say?!


Cherry: I will not obey, Papa.


(Cherry turns her head to look at Cameron, the crazy look has returned.)


Jake: I managed to remove your mental commands. She's free now.


Cammeron: You fool! You've doomed us all!


(Cherry calmly walks over to the magnifire, and with a single punch, shatters the glass casing. then, with a single hoist, she wrenches the device from the ground)


Cherry: This is for making me your slave!


(Cherry brings the Magnifire down, like a huge club. Barely missing Cameron.)


Cameron: Cherry! Don't do anything Rash!


(dodges another swing)


Cameron: I'm your father!


(dodges another swing)


Cameron: I did it for both of us, so you wouldn't hurt yourself!


(dodges another swing)


Cameron: Cherry! Stop this foolishness!


(Fails to dodge the next swing, and is flung into the canvas wall)


Jake: Cherry! Please, you need to tell me how to break your fathers spell.


Cherry: Bête. All you need to do is turn the Magnifire to reverse.


(she looks at the wrecked Magnifire she was using as a weapon moments ago.)


Cherry: Oopsy.


Jake: Great, now how am I going to get everyone back to normal?


(As if in answer, Jake notices as every light in the city goes out, including all of the attractions at Mezmerland, as a yellow glow radiates from the city, catching the attention of everyone in the park, the glow manages to break the spell on half the audience. Only to put the other half, the females, under its own spell, as they begin walking toward it, their eyes still glased, but now a different color.


Jake: (facepalms) Ah, Mato. You crazy guy. I was wondering when he was going to cause another massive power outage.


(Jake suddenly notices that Cherry is also caught in the glow, and mindlessly walks out of the tent. He pays no attention, until he notices that the glow is burning away the clouds, exposing the sun.


Jake: Cherry! No!


(He jumps to tackle her, only to find that the sun does not effect her at all)


Jake: what?


Cameron: you little fool. Sunlight only effects our eyes, since our senses are ten times stronger than that of a human.


(Cameron finally gets up and prepares to attack, but as he runs at Jake, Cherry suddenly looks back. Her newly forged bond with Jake breaks the Chick Magnets spell, and she intercepts her father)


cherry: Personne ne touche mon chéri!


Cameron: O rats!


(Showing her unbelievable strength, Cherry grabs her father by the ankle, and hammer tosses him right through the canvas roof, sending him far off into the ocean)


Jake:...Wow, just wow.


(cherry runs up to Jake and hugs him a bit too tight)


Cherry: Mon chéri!


Jake: Air...please.


cherry: Oops, sorry.


(she releases him and gives him a regular hug)


Cherry: Thank you so much for freeing me. I will never forget this.


(Unexpectedly, as Jake turns to leave, Cherry kisses him in the check. causing him t blush bright red.)


Jake: Uh...I...


cherry: Bon par.


(With that, Cherry skips off happily, and Jake heads for home.)


(Back at Matos lab, Jake found all of his house mates, along with Diana and Mina, all standing around the Chick Magnet, staring vacantly at it.)


Mato: Yes! I am a genius! With all this new data, I can already begin my next experiment.


Jake: (face palms for the third time) Please tell me it isn't going to involve the girls.


Mato: What kind of scientist would I be if I didn't use there beauties in my research?


Jake: sorry, Professor, but I think they've been entranced long enough for one day.

(With that, Jake unplugged the chick Magnet. Just as Mato had the misfortune of inadvertantly groping one of Sarahs breasts.

Mato: Um...I can explain...

(As Jake walks up the stairs, there are many sounds of punching and broken furnature)

(As Jake gets ready for bed, having to dodge a lingerie clad Dawn out of self preservation, he entered the bathroom to take a shower, and his nose instantly became a volcano of blood from what he saw)

(Cherry, completely naked, and in the tub, censored only by the bubbles.)

Cherry: Bonjour. Room for one more in this house?

(Jake was about to answer, when he accidentally tripped on the threshold, stumbled forward, and fell in the tub, landing on top of Cherry, with his face right between her breasts. His resulting blush was bright enough to work as a flashlight)

Jen: (standing just outside the bathroom) Hmm, am I interrupting something?

(End.)

(Hope you all like it, Sorry that the first 2 were so short.)
Original Writer: AAGGRESSS

Original Release Date: May 5th-7th 2010

AAGGRESSS removed his old HBL stories some time ago and allowed me to reupload them for preservation's sake.
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