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HypnoBishoujoLand: Independence Aside...

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Karmen sat at her desk in the classroom. Classes were finished for the day but she still had business to conduct. She'd evaluated all of her students and deemed a particular two of them to be ideal for her purposes. These girls didn’t speak to each other much, but that didn't matter to Karmen.

Her laptop was on and the program was loaded. All she needed to do now was await the knock at the door.

Right on time, there it was. “Come in,” Karmen called.

The door opened and in walked a lovely young woman with olive skin, black hair and striking yellow eyes.  “You wanted to see me, Ma’am?”

“Yes, Miss Long. Please, take a seat.” The girl took a seat in the designated spot and waited for her teacher to begin speaking. “I’ve asked you here to inquire about what you plan to do with yourself once you’ve graduated.”

“Oh, uh… I haven’t really thought about it much, Ma’am.”

“Well, I just so happen to have a proposition for you, if you’d hear me out.”

“Y-yes, Ma’am. Of course.”

“Good. Then I’d like you to take a look at this.” Karmen turned the laptop around with the program loaded.

The display depicted a young woman, about the age of Karmen’s students, with short blonde hair and pink eyes. The digital girl smiled happily.

“Is this an animation course?” the student asked.

“Something like that. Click on her nose and see what happens.”

“Alright then.” She did so and upon having her nose clicked, the digital girl sneezed, her eyes shifting to a series of shifting colours once they reopened. “Uh, Ma’am? I think something’s wrong with the program.”

“Oh? What’s the matter?”

“The eyes have gone all weird.”

“Weird how?”

Weird, like… colourful.”

“Describe it for me.”

“It’s pretty. The colours as so… soothing and-“

“Relaxing?”

“Yeah. I feel like I could just watch them forever.”

“Feel free to keep watching them. But pay close attention. It’s important that we be as detailed as possible when we report this issue to the programmers.”

“Yeah… don’t want to make a mistake.”

“Exactly. You’re such a smart girl, Miss Long. In fact, you’re one of my favourite students.”

“I am?”

“Yes. Very clever, and very pretty too.”

“I’m really not-“

“But you are. In fact, there is no greater thing in this world than being told by another woman that you are pretty. Women are so beautiful and smart. It only makes sense that we of such beauty and intellect should stick together.”

“Stick to…gether…”

“You’re so beautiful and smart, Miss Long. That’s why I’d like you to join me.”

“Join you…”

“Together, we can make a world ruled by smart, beautiful women, with dim-witted, ugly men beneath our feet.”

“Beneath our… feet…”

“Good girl. But for this to work, you must do two things for me.”

“Anything… for you…”

“First, you must lose your love of men and love only women.”

“But… Steve…”

“Steve? Is he your boyfriend?”

“Yes… boyfriend…”

“Well, forget about him. You do not love him. You only love women. Steve is the enemy. You must break up with him and love only women.”

“But…”

“If you do, you may continue to see the beautiful colours.”

“Beautiful… colours…”

“Break up with Steve.”

“Break up with… Steve…”

“Love only women.”

“Love only women…”

“Obey only me.”

“Obey only… you…”

“Good girl. You’ve done so well. You can come out now, Pamela!”

“Yes, Mistress Karmen,” said a voice as another student, this one with long red hair and glassy brown eyes, walked out of the supply closet and stood at attention before her teacher.

“Miss Long, meet Pamela. She is to be your new partner.”

“New… partner…”

“That’s right. You two will serve me together. You will be partners. You will be best friends. You will be lovers.”

“Lovers…” the pair repeated the word as it became more important to them than any other.

“Now, I want you two to repeat after me: I am a lesbian.”

“We are lesbians.”

“I will remain so until I graduate.”

“We will remain so until we graduate.”

“I am independent of men.”

“We are independent of men.”

“I must join your organisation.”

“We must join your organisation.”

“I must obey you.”

“We must obey you.”

“Very good. Now, I want you to kiss and fondle one another, feeling your love for one another, and other women as well, grow with each passing second, and your love for men decreasing as it does. Do you understand?”

“Yes, Mistress Karmen.”

“Good. Then get to it.”

“Yes, Mistress Karmen.”

The dark-haired girl moved her glassy eyes away from the screen for the first time since the colours had started, and stared into Pamela’s. They locked lips just as they’d been told and kissing and fondled one another, to their mistress’ utter delight.

There was another knock at the door. “Enter,” Karmen called.

In walked a slightly older woman with short brown hair with a small ponytail on the right side. She wore a pair of glasses over her purple eyes and a dark pink jumpsuit with a lab coat over the top.

“Ah, Linda. How is our little project coming along?”

“Very well, Milady. By our projections, the prototype from Professor Mato’s blueprints body should be ready to go within the next three months.”

“Very good. And our list of potential recruits?”

“Roughly one hundred-strong, Milday.”

“Excellent. What do you think of my latest acquisitions?” Karmen pointed to the two kissing girls.

“Perfect choices, of course, Milady.”

“I’m glad you think so. You may go now.”

“A-actually, M-Milady,” Linda said nervously, blushing slightly. “I-I was hoping I might… say something.”

“By all means.”

“I-I just wanted to thank you for releasing me from under the thumb of that tyrannical… man, Professor Mato.”

“Of course, Linda. Anything for a fellow woman. Especially one of such… fine intellect.”

“Please, Milady, you’re embarrassing me. But, is there anything I might do to thank you?”

“Hmm. Well, I’ve been on my feet all day. Why don’t you give them a good lick?”

“Y-yes, Milady! It would be an honour!”

Karmen kicked her red pumps off and her loyal, obedient head scientist was soon on her hands and knees, licking vigorously.

Soon, the Association to Stop the Insidious Domination of Evil would be up and running with hundreds of loyal women helping to overthrow the rule of men, all under the rulership of Karmen Krymsyn, with Pam and Ami as her greatest servants. Then, she could make her move against the most nefarious man of all: Professor Mato.
I feel like some explanation is needed here:

*First off, thank you, America, for having such a hard-to-write for holiday in Independence Day.

*Second, the whole A.S.I.D.E. thing is a group of militant feminists created by Tamale Knight but never properly resovled and, as such, this is to set up another story in my "TK Resolution Series", which also includes the already released Darkest Before The Dawn.

And with that, the Twelve Holidays of Hypnos comes to an end. I'll do another set in December, don't worry.
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