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HypnoBishoujoLand: Bad Aim

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This story follows on from Black and White. If you've not read that story, beware of spoilers ahead.


Sarah dropped down onto the couch and sighed deeply. All this getting the YPD back up to a good standard was very taxing for its new chief. She slowly slid her boots off and rested her tired feet on the coffee table.

"Rough day, huh?" asked Jessica as she entered the living room. Jessica had been helping where she could, but she also had her own responsibilities in the military, especially in light of her recent promotion to Captain.

"Oh, pull up a chair, I have lots to tell you," Sarah replied, somewhat sarcastically.

"That bad, huh? Well, if you need to relax, I could always hypnotize you."

Sarah went to retort, but couldn't find the energy. "Sure. May as well."

Jessica was surprised. "Normally, you'd comment on my inability to hypnotize without trancing myself."

"You've gotten better. Now, hurry up and whammy me so I can stop feeling so dead."

Jessica chuckled as she sat on the coffee table and placed Sarah's feet in her lap so she could massage them with her free hand for added relaxation. "Okay, just follow the watch and listen."

"I know how this works, Jess," Sarah grumbled.

"Quiet, you." Jessica let the watch swing on its axis smoothly, smiling as Sarah's eyes followed it, trained to do so by the countless times she had been hypnotized this way. That thought also made her kind of sad.

The induction went on for a couple of minutes, but Sarah, despite her lack of energy, remained just as alert as she had when they had begun. Jess and Sarah were so focused on the attempted induction that they failed to notice Lucia enter the room from the door behind Sarah.

"Hello, friends," the angel greeted cheerfully.

"Aren't you getting sleepy yet?" Jessica asked, trying to hide her frustration.

"Yesssss..." the angel droned quietly as her eyes glazed over from staring at the watch.

"Not really," Sarah shrugged, eyes never leaving the watch. "Maybe I'm just not as tired as I thought."

"Hey, Sarah, how was work?" asked Fawn as she entered and looked upon the scene.

"But you're following the watch, aren't you? You should be falling under my power."

"Under your... power..."

"Sorry, but I'm not."

"Ooh, hypnosis?" said Yuta as she entered. "Can I play?"

"Just follow the watch and listen to my voice."

"Follow the watch... Listen to your voice..."

"What do you think I've been doing, watching a fly dart back and forth?"

"Hey, guys, what's going on?" asked Washina as she entered the room.

"Well, clearly, you're not doing it right. Just follow the watch and do as I say."

"Do as you say..."

"I'm sorry, Jess, but it's just not working."

"Why is everyone stood the doorway?" Midori asked.

"This isn't difficult. Just shut up and watch."

"Shut up... and watch..."

"I'm trying, but your tone isn't condusive for an induction."

"What are you people doing?" Jen demanded as she pushed her way past the others.

"Okay, okay, I'm calm. You are getting sleeeepyyy..."

"I am getting sleeeepyyy..."

"I think I feel it a little."

"What is the meaning of this?" Katia demanded upon her entrance.

"That's good, just keep watching and listening."

"Keep watching and... listening..."

"Yes..."

"This is too rich," Dawn sniggered as she hovered over everyone else.

"I am your mistress."

"Yes, Mistress Jessica."

"You are my mistress."

"Why is it so crowded in here?" asked Diana as she and Mina broke through.

"And you must obey me."

"We must obey..."

"And I must obey you..."

"Very good. Now listen closely to Mistress Jessica."

"Yes, Mistress Jessica," the eleven girls replied in a monotonous chorus, finally alerting Jessica to the presence of the others.

"What the-? Oh, dammit! Okay, everyone but Sarah-" Before she could continue, the phone rang. "Ugh, hold on a minute."

"Yes, Mistress Jessica," the chorus of girls replied.

Jessica sighed as she picked up the phone. "Hello?"

"I hear and obey, Mistress Jessica," droned the voice of Barbara on the other end.

"Bu- je- wh- ...eeeeeeeh?" Jessica's mind could not form real words for a few seconds. "H-How-?" The phone let out a beep and Jessica sighed again. "Hold on, I've got a call on the other line."

"I will hold, Mistress."

"Yeah, you do that." Jessica clicked over to the other line. "Hello?"

"I must obey, my Mistress," said the unmistakeably husky voice of Lilith.

"But... How...?"

"Your frustration at Sarah's resistance threw off your aim, Mistress Jessica. It was so atrocious, it crossed continents to enthrall me to your will. Command me and I shall obey."

Jessica had no idea how to respond to that. Not that she had the time to properly contemplate it as there was now a call on the other line. "Oh, come on! Hold on a minute, I have to take this."

"I await your command, my sexy Mistress."

Jessica couldn't tell if Lilith was messing with her, even while hypnotized. "Hello?"

"I am ready to obey, Mistress," said an unfamiliar voice on the other end.

"Wait, who is this?"

"I am Karmen Krymsyn, Mistress. The former mistress of A.S.I.D.E. I await your command to destroy all men, new Mistress of A.S.I.D.E."

Jessica almost dropped the phone in exasperation. "N-No, there'll be none of that going on here..."

"Then, I must resist."

"N-No! No. Stay in my power, the power of a woman."

"Power of a woman... Yes, Mistress..."

"Report to the Mato House as soon as you can for your first command. From a woman."

"Yes, Mistress. I obey." Krymsyn's phone hit the floor on the other end as footsteps faded away, indicating her compliance.

Jessica took a moment to wait for another call, but none came. "Good grief," she sighed. "It's gonna be one of those days, isn't it?"

"Yes, Mistress," the various women replied.
Another quick short I wrote in about an hour. I had the idea pretty much as soon as I posted the last short. The idea of hypnotizing someone so far away was going to be used in a story aaggresss never got around to writing for HBL, so credit to him for that.
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Hah! Love it. Fun and silly and sexy are three words that should go together more often :)