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If I started offering paid story commissions, would anyone be interested this time?


This story follows on from Black and White. If you've not read that story, beware of spoilers ahead.

Sarah dropped down onto the couch and sighed deeply. All this getting the YPD back up to a good standard was very taxing for its new chief. She slowly slid her boots off and rested her tired feet on the coffee table.

"Rough day, huh?" asked Jessica as she entered the living room. Jessica had been helping where she could, but she also had her own responsibilities in the military, especially in light of her recent promotion to Captain.

"Oh, pull up a chair, I have lots to tell you," Sarah replied, somewhat sarcastically.

"That bad, huh? Well, if you need to relax, I could always hypnotize you."

Sarah went to retort, but couldn't find the energy. "Sure. May as well."

Jessica was surprised. "Normally, you'd comment on my inability to hypnotize without trancing myself."

"You've gotten better. Now, hurry up and whammy me so I can stop feeling so dead."

Jessica chuckled as she sat on the coffee table and placed Sarah's feet in her lap so she could massage them with her free hand for added relaxation. "Okay, just follow the watch and listen."

"I know how this works, Jess," Sarah grumbled.

"Quiet, you." Jessica let the watch swing on its axis smoothly, smiling as Sarah's eyes followed it, trained to do so by the countless times she had been hypnotized this way. That thought also made her kind of sad.

The induction went on for a couple of minutes, but Sarah, despite her lack of energy, remained just as alert as she had when they had begun. Jess and Sarah were so focused on the attempted induction that they failed to notice Lucia enter the room from the door behind Sarah.

"Hello, friends," the angel greeted cheerfully.

"Aren't you getting sleepy yet?" Jessica asked, trying to hide her frustration.

"Yesssss..." the angel droned quietly as her eyes glazed over from staring at the watch.

"Not really," Sarah shrugged, eyes never leaving the watch. "Maybe I'm just not as tired as I thought."

"Hey, Sarah, how was work?" asked Fawn as she entered and looked upon the scene.

"But you're following the watch, aren't you? You should be falling under my power."

"Under your... power..."

"Sorry, but I'm not."

"Ooh, hypnosis?" said Yuta as she entered. "Can I play?"

"Just follow the watch and listen to my voice."

"Follow the watch... Listen to your voice..."

"What do you think I've been doing, watching a fly dart back and forth?"

"Hey, guys, what's going on?" asked Washina as she entered the room.

"Well, clearly, you're not doing it right. Just follow the watch and do as I say."

"Do as you say..."

"I'm sorry, Jess, but it's just not working."

"Why is everyone stood the doorway?" Midori asked.

"This isn't difficult. Just shut up and watch."

"Shut up... and watch..."

"I'm trying, but your tone isn't condusive for an induction."

"What are you people doing?" Jen demanded as she pushed her way past the others.

"Okay, okay, I'm calm. You are getting sleeeepyyy..."

"I am getting sleeeepyyy..."

"I think I feel it a little."

"What is the meaning of this?" Katia demanded upon her entrance.

"That's good, just keep watching and listening."

"Keep watching and... listening..."


"This is too rich," Dawn sniggered as she hovered over everyone else.

"I am your mistress."

"Yes, Mistress Jessica."

"You are my mistress."

"Why is it so crowded in here?" asked Diana as she and Mina broke through.

"And you must obey me."

"We must obey..."

"And I must obey you..."

"Very good. Now listen closely to Mistress Jessica."

"Yes, Mistress Jessica," the eleven girls replied in a monotonous chorus, finally alerting Jessica to the presence of the others.

"What the-? Oh, dammit! Okay, everyone but Sarah-" Before she could continue, the phone rang. "Ugh, hold on a minute."

"Yes, Mistress Jessica," the chorus of girls replied.

Jessica sigh as she picked up the phone. "Hello?"

"I hear and obey, Mistress Jessica," droned the voice of Barbara on the other end.

"Bu- je- wh- ...eeeeeeeh?" Jessica's mind could not form real words for a few seconds. "H-How-?" The phone let out a beep and Jessica sighed again. "Hold on, I've got a call on the other line."

"I will hold, Mistress."

"Yeah, you do that." Jessica clicked over to the other line. "Hello?"

"I must obey, my Mistress," said the unmistakeably husk voice of Lilith.

"But... How...?"

"Your frustration at Sarah's resistance threw off your aim, Mistress Jessica. It was so atrocious, it crossed continents to enthrall me to your will. Command me and I shall obey."

Jessica had no idea how to respond to that. Not that she had the time to properly contemplate it as there was now a call on the other line. "Oh, come on! Hold on a minute, I have to take this."

"I await your command, my sexy Mistress."

Jessica couldn't tell if Lilith was messing with her, even while hypnotized. "Hello?"

"I am ready to obey, Mistress," said an unfamiliar voice on the other end.

"Wait, who is this?"

"I am Karmen Krymsyn, Mistress. The former mistress of A.S.I.D.E. I await your command to destroy all men, new Mistress of A.S.I.D.E."

Jessica almost dropped the phone in exasperation. "N-No, there'll be none of that going on here..."

"Then, I must resist."

"N-No! No. Stay in my power, the power of a woman."

"Power of a woman... Yes, Mistress..."

"Report to the Mato House as soon as you can for your first command. From a woman."

"Yes, Mistress. I obey." Krymsyn's phone hit the floor on the other end as footsteps faded away, indicating her compliance.

Jessica took a moment to wait for another call, but none came. "Good grief," she sighed. "It's gonna be one of those days, isn't it?"

"Yes, Mistress," the various women replied.
HypnoBishoujoLand: Bad Aim
Another quick short I wrote in about an hour. I had the idea pretty much as soon as I posted the last short. The idea of hypnotizing someone so far away was going to be used in a story aaggresss never got around to writing for HBL, so credit to him for that.
"I must obey," Katia droned as her eyes turned to spirals under the power of Yuta's gaze.

"Yay!" Yuta cried upon completing her induction. Katia had made some snide remarks, as usual, regarding Yuta. Given how often Katia did so and received a hypnotic comeuppance in return, Yuta was surprised Katia still did it. It was as if she never learned, like in a series where characters never change and the status quo goes unchanged forever.

Yuta stared at Katia, spiral-eyed and at attention. Katia was always Yuta's favourite 'playmate', since Yuta felt Katia always deserved it. But as she went to issue her first command to her hypnotized nemesis, Yuta had a sudden thought.

She and Washina had promised to stop abusing their powers, like Jake. But Katia deserved to be punished for her comments, right? Would it be wrong to punish Katia like this?

"What are you waiting for?" Yuta looked down onto her left shoulder to find a miniature version of herself dressed in a sexy devil costume. "She was mean to you so she deserves it."

"No," came another high-pitched voice from Yuta's other shoulder, this time from a miniature angel version of Yuta. "You promised you wouldn't abuse your power. You promised yourself and Washina. You can't forget that."

"Oh, shut up, you," Devil Yuta snapped.

"No, I won't" Angel Yuta retorted. "I won't let you lead Yuta down the dark path when she's so close to becoming a real, mature woman."

"Oh, please. Yuta? The robot girl with the mind of a five year old and the power to bend others to her will? You think she can resist her urge to play?"

"She can and she will! She's going to wake Katia up and send her on her way and there's nothing you can do to stop her!"

"Oh, yeah?" Devil Yuta asked, her red eyes spiraling hypnotically. "I can make you do what I want, can't I?"

"Yes, Mistress," Angel Yuta droned, eyes matching Katia's.

"See? Now, tell Yuta to take advantage."

"Yes, Mistress. Yuta, you should take advantage of Katia. You know you must."

"Yes, I must..." Yuta shook her head clear. "No! I won't do it!"

"Resistant, are we? Then resist this!" Devil Yuta's eyes spiraled as they locked on to Yuta's. Yuta tried to look away but she felt the compulsion to obey. She resisted with all her might. "Still resisting? Don't you see how silly that is? I'm you. If you resist my will, you're only resisting your own will. Isn't that silly? Wouldn't it make so much more sense to obey yourself?"

Devil Yuta's logic made too much sense for Yuta to resist any longer. "Yes. I must obey me."

"Good, now, let's go over there and take advantage of Katia."

"Yes, Mistress Me..." Yuta stepped closer to Katia, who had remained entranced and at attention the entire time.

"And I see we have more company," Devil Yuta grinned upon seeing Devil and Angel Katia, equally entranced. "Yuta, tell them to strip."

"Yes, Mistress Me. Katias, you must strip," Yuta commanded.

"Yes, we must strip," the three Katias droned as they moved to obey, soon all reduced to their underwear.

"Good, good," Devil Yuta drooled as she rubbed her hands in preparation. "Yuta, you and Katia make out. Angel Yuta and Angel Katia do the same. Devil Katia, you're mine."

After Yuta forwarded her command to Katia, all five thralls droned, "Yes, Mistress."

As they made out, Devil Yuta very much enjoying Devil Katia's company, no one involved noticed the footsteps approaching from outside until the door opened and Washina walked in.

"Hey, Yuta, can I borrow your... CD... player...?" Washina stopped upon seeing Yuta and Katia making out. "Hey, hey, hey, I thought we had an agreement."

Yuta said nothing, simply continuing with Katia.

"Fine then." Washina withdrew her pocket watch and dangled it between Yuta and Katia. "Watch the watch and obey."

Neither girl stopped, nor did their eyes change to indicate a new trance.

"Hey, you listening? I said obey!"

"I obeeeey..."

Washina was sure Yuta's mouth didn't move as she responded, and her voice was strangely high-pitched. "Uuuhh... Yuta?"

"Yes, Mistress Washina."

Washina noticed that the voice was lower down and finally saw Devil Yuta stood at attention on Yuta's shoulder.

Washina rubbed her eyes in disbelief. "Have I not been getting enough sleep or has someone been messing with my head again?" She waved a hand in front of Devil Yuta before lifting her off of Yuta's shoulder and staring intently at the tiny girl.

"What are you?" Washina asked.

"I am Yuta's evil conscience, Mistress Washina," the miniature Yuta explained.

Washina's brain could barely comprehend this. "And you... what, hypnotized Yuta to make her do evil things?"

"Yes, Mistress Washina," Devil Yuta confirmed.

"Well then, I won't have you interfering with Yuta's attempts to become a better person. From now on, you will be a good girl."

"Yes, Mistress. I will be a good girl."

"Now, hand control of Yuta and Katia to me."

Devil Yuta did so and the two entranced girls stood facing Washina, awaiting their next command.

"Good grief, this house is weird," Washina sighed. "I worry about my sanity sometimes..."

"You're telling me," said a small voice from down below. Washina looked down to find a small devil version of herself swinging a pocket watch. "Why don't I make aaaall your worries go away?"

"Yes, Mistress Me..."
HypnoBishoujoLand: Crisis of Conscience
I had another idea for a short, somewhat surreal story here and wrote it up in about half an hour. I considered going further on with the story to show them getting out of this situation, but felt the ending was stronger this way. Still, they get out of it, obviously. But, I do kinda want to do more with this concept. If you'd like to see more, please let me know.
Christie's Interrogation by VG-MC
Christie's Interrogation
This was a commission for :iconblkrckr26:. He wanted this:

I was wondering if U could do a pic of Christie Monteiro being interrogated by Nina Williams by being tickled in stocks while Williams leaves kiss marks in a close up of Christie's feet all over her bare soles and toes oh, and could U make them in Street FighterXTekken form and could Nina be fully clothed shoes, socks, & etc.

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zorro-venom Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2015
thank you for the watch, it means a lot to me!! OuO
VG-MC Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015
It does?
zorro-venom Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015
yuuup!! ^^
VG-MC Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015
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assassins-creed1999 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
I really like the kingdom hearts ones you did.
VG-MC Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
assassins-creed1999 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
I was wondering. What about hypnotized KH girls licking or sucking each others feet. Like say Sora told hypnotized Namine to lick and enjoy hypnotized Kairi's feet and Kairi does Namine's feet? 
VG-MC Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015
I've done a LOT of stuff with Kairi and it really burned me out on using her, to be honest.
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MetroidFan732 Featured By Owner May 21, 2015
VG-MC. Can you do a Rebecca Chambers Barefoot Stomp POV? I want her stomp pose to look like this gal's pose in this picture.… Specifically Rebecca's left arm and left hand to pose exactly like the one in the image. Be sure to include her boots in the photo, one on each side of her facing forward. If possible, please add 2 white blank textures. One on top of each boot indicating her socks.
NaughtyMightyena Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for watching me vg-mc, I really like your work and am honored to have you watch me. I hope you'll enjoy my future work! :)
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